tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3408189681357356809.post237206938186861269..comments2024-03-05T23:37:42.518+13:00Comments on Mitchell @ Pt England School: Fijian Warrior - final version of narrativePES Blogs Admin 2014http://www.blogger.com/profile/15710822352595092146noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3408189681357356809.post-60692161236585370382016-06-29T16:53:47.659+12:002016-06-29T16:53:47.659+12:00Hi Mitchell
I can tell that you have worked very ...Hi Mitchell<br /><br />I can tell that you have worked very hard to write this narrative. I love your story because it was interesting to read and flowed really well. Remember to check and edit paragraph 6 as the sentence beginnings are quite repetitive. I can't wait to see how well your artwork matches your narrative. Well done!Mrs Lagitupunoreply@blogger.com