Tuesday, 18 August 2015

Mitchell Trade Fair Writing

WALT:  Elaborate on our ideas by giving extra detail and background information.
            Use capital letters & full stops correctly.
Start Writing Here:  Hi my name is Mitchell. Last Friday Team 4 had a Trade Fair. We had a Trade Fair in the both classes. Room 9 and 10 and Room 6,7 and 8. We had a Trade fair so people can Order things and we can make it and then we give it to them and they pay us. Last month we each filled out a form. The form said which group you want to work in. We all filled it in. Then the next week we got into our groups. I was in the homeware group. We watched some youtube videos about how we could make our stuff. Me and my buddy ben were watching some youtube videos about how to make soap. We wanted to make soap. We were going to sell them for 1PT. Pieces means cents and PTS means dollars. Miss Lavakula got the ingredients for us. She got some Glycerine. At Lunchtime Miss Lavakula called me and ben to come in the hall kitchen. She poured some Glycerine in a bowl. Then she put some hot water in the bowl. Next she told ben to put the bowl in the microwave for 20 seconds. After it was in the microwave i got a spoon i was mixing the Glycerine. Then we kept on putting it in the microwave for 20 seconds. I put some olive oil in the moulds so it wouldn't stick to the moulds. Then we smelt the fragrances. There was Strawberry and Lemon fragrance. The Lemon fragrance smelt like candle wax and the Strawberry fragrance smelt so nice. We picked the Strawberry fragrance. Miss Lavakula put some little drops of the fragrance into the mixture. Then we put the mixture into the moulds. The next week the soap was ready. The soap looked so cool. The soap did not have any colour but we were going to make some more soap with colour. When it was friday it was the Trade fair. Everyone was selling their stuff that they made. We kept on making orders. Now we are going to make all of the stuff. Thanks for reading. Bye. By Mitchell.

Tuesday, 11 August 2015

Mitchell Creative Writing- The Plane

WALT: Use adverbs to make our writing exciting.
Text type: Narrative
Helpful Links:
List of adverbs which might help you.  


P1: Introduction:

P2: What happened

P3: Conclusion:
Once you have finished draw an image that represents your writing in sumo paint or ABC paint. And post your writing to the blog and blog log.

Start Writing Here: I was walking with all of my friends to the Airport. Suddenly i heard this sound. I thought it was only a little fly flapping his wings. But suddenly the little sound got louder and louder. I said to all my friends “Can you hear that sound” They said Yes. I nervously looked behind me. There was a Humongous plane behind us. I loudly screamed “RUN” We all ran for our lives. I was on the side of the plane. I dived down like i was going to score a try for a rugby game. All of my other friends were safe. They ran with me. Three of my friends got hit and they were injured. One of them had a broken leg and the two others injured their face by bumping into the plane and flying and then falling down on their face. I was thinking about how the plane was going to stop. The plane slowed down and went on fire. All the people in the plane were very lucky. They fell and crashed the windows and fell out the plane before the plane set on fire. Three of my friends and the people that were on the plane walked into the airport. All the workers called for help and they called 111. We needed the Ambulance truck for the Injured people,We needed the fire truck to set out the fire and we needed the police to come and make sure everyone was ok and made sure no one went around that area. The news reporters came talking all about it. I was on the news with my friends getting Interviewed. The story was on the front page of the newspaper. Everyone was talking about it. The plane driver hit his head on the ground and had brain damage. He couldn’t even remember what had even happened. 3 months later my friends were ok. They got better and all the people on the plane got better too. We were all happy. The End.