Wednesday, 21 September 2016

Mitchell Writing Narrative - Kayak Trip

In a small Japanese village named Taichou by the owner of the land lived the Taichou people. They lived near the riverbanks of the great waterfall Shishu that flowed all the way to the border between North Korea and China. In that village lived the Pichu family who owned the local store Sushi Palace. They were a very hard working family. The store owners had 1 child named Taeyoung . She loved to take adventures by the big land owned by the Raichu family the parents of her best friend Hitachi. He loved to go on adventure with her and play cooking and other games they loved to play. One evening TaeyoungÅ› parents were cooking then suddenly they heard a loud shake. “Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh” both her parents roared. “Get the kayak” Taeyoung screeched. “Hitachi run” she screamed. Hitachi clutched his parents hands and ran to the 3 double kayaks.

“Quickly towards Shishu” they cried. Mr and Mrs Pichu went in 1 double kayak, the Raichu parents doubled up and Taeyoung and Hitachi went on the other double. They all put their kayaks out in the flowing waves,jumped in and paddled their way down the waterfall. “Pwo Shhhhhhhhhhh” their kayaks glided down the flowing waterfall. Tae Young's voice raised so high her vocal cords were pitched.  Hitachi said “Bye mum and dad” he knew they were going another direction. Swishhhhhhh. The kayak turned the other way.  How Wwwwww did we get here? Taeyoung asked. They were in an magical river. Hitachi did the paddling and Taeyoung just looked around in a mood of amazement.  The waters were as calm as a sleeping baby. “Whoaaaah” the willow tree talked. “Hello welcome to the paradise of Japan” she peacefully said. Animals were chatting in excitement.

Ging Ging. A bathhouse was in sight. “We need to get out of here” Taeyoung whispered to Hitachi’s ear. “NOW” POOOOOOF. A witch appeared out of the blue. “AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH” “What are you doing in my property”  “Nothing we are just enjoying the paradise of your PROPERTY.” The witch said in order to leave you have to work. “Never you are not the boss” Hitachi said in bravery. “If you do not you will get publicly tortured in front of my monsters then you will suffer with great pain” Taeyoung gave a big hug to Hitachi and weeped. Her tears dropped into the lake with fear.  “OK we will work for you but you have to promise us you will let us free” “DEAL”                                                                                                                                                                                                                

“Your first job is to clean up the bathhouse.” They both stood up. “We will do it” They cleaned for hours and hours. “Finally they got let out” “Hahahahaha” I will never let you out.” You are my servants. “NO YOU PROMISED A DEAL” No I do not want to let you out. You are my servants forever. Hitachi ran to the Willow Tree as it made a movement. “Here take this and throw it in her eyes. There she will be blinded. “Ok but how do we get out” “Pull the magical lever that will open the gates.” OK thanks. Hitachi ran and threw the liquid into her eyes. “AHHHHHHHH” she screamt as her eyes burned in flames. Hitachi pulled the lever,jumped into the kayak with Taeyoung and paddled their way out. “Bye Bye loser” They paddled down the river and into the cam waters of Tokyo. “HITACHI,TAEYOUNG” they paddled towards them. “Where were you 2” Long story short we were working”

“Well I guess we are going to be living in kayaks all our life” Actually Hitachi’s dad built a wooden house beside the big piece of land that no one was using. “Cool”
There is a school just down the road. “Yayyyy school” Taeyoung said with excitement. “ Why don't we go back to our new house” SURE.

They lived a very happy life. The End.

By Mitchell                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           

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